Neptune
these surfaces had
no empathy for cocoons,
winds will erode
core-stones too soon,
thank god,
i was building a
home on Neptune.
patience can never
stay porous for long,
the lady who checks the
sundial turned to brune,
thank god,
i was building a
home on Neptune.
rivulets rugged their
feet , jumped into holes,
salts of the oceans
were fed with the spoon,
thank god,
i was building a
home on Neptune.
cursed were the
carnal desires for truth,
cursed was the
celibacy of the moon,
thank god,i was building a
home on Neptune.
- chetna ๐ป
A home on Neptune sounds peaceful
ReplyDeleteyet questions still belong to Earth
Silence may hide the storm
but it never answers it
Thank you for reading my poem ❤️. Yes , our questions are answered by the place where we reside. But this poem takes readers to attain a Surreal experience, just a relief for a brief , I've another poems for The Earth, this is for The Neptune (escape).
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ReplyDeleteThank you for reading my poem ❤️
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