Neptune

these surfaces had
no empathy for cocoons,
winds will erode  
core-stones too soon,
thank god,
i was building a 
home on Neptune.

patience can never
stay porous for long,
the lady who checks the
sundial turned to brune, 
thank god,
i was building a 
home on Neptune.

rivulets rugged their
feet , jumped into holes,
salts of the oceans
were fed with the spoon,
thank god,
i was building a 
home on Neptune.

cursed were the
carnal desires for truth,
cursed was the 
celibacy of the moon,
thank god,
i was building a 
home on Neptune.

- chetna ๐ŸŒป 


Comments

  1. A home on Neptune sounds peaceful
    yet questions still belong to Earth
    Silence may hide the storm
    but it never answers it

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    1. Thank you for reading my poem ❤️. Yes , our questions are answered by the place where we reside. But this poem takes readers to attain a Surreal experience, just a relief for a brief , I've another poems for The Earth, this is for The Neptune (escape).

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